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MindSpeak Winning Essay Gallery

Your Voice Matters – Speak Your Mind!

Explore the winning essays from our New Jersey middle and high school student MindSpeak submissions! 

Middle School

Maylin Nichols

7th grade

Heritage Middle School

Livingston, NJ

Renee Jha

7th grade

Millburn Middle School

Millburn, NJ

Srikala Lanka

8th grade

Thomas Edison Energysmart Charter School(TEECS)

Franklin Township, NJ

Vihaan Gandhi

8th grade

Woodrow Wilson Middle School

Edison, NJ

Warren Sanuhath Pinnawalage

7th grade

Nicholas J Sacco Junior High School

North Bergen, NJ

High School

Shanti Swadia

11th grade

The Pingry School

Basking Ridge, NJ

Zaynab Shafi

11th grade

Thomas Edison Energysmart Charter School(TEECS)

Franklin Township, NJ

Eden Mandelbaum

11th grade

Livingston High School

Livingston, NJ

Maryam Shafi

12th grade

Thomas Edison Energysmart Charter School(TEECS)

Franklin Township, NJ

Middle School

Jacob Lee

8th Grade
Tenakill Middle School

Closter, NJ

Vihaan Gandhi

7th Grade
Woodrow Wilson Middle School
Edison, NJ

Amelie Schey

7th Grade
Valley View Middle School
Denville, NJ

Aashrita Bhagawatula

8th Grade
Heritage Middle School
Livingston, NJ

Ameerah Abdullah

8th Grade
Liberty Middle School
West Orange, NJ

Aryana Diaz

7th Grade
Roosevelt Middle School
West Orange, NJ

High School

Joshua Metters

12th Grade
Livingston High School
Livingston, NJ

Kayla Burrowes

11th Grade
West Orange High School
West Orange, NJ

Shona Kumar

10th Grade
Livingston High School
Livingston, NJ

Middle School

Vihaan Joglekar

7th Grade
Heritage Middle School
Livingston, NJ

Surbhi Choubey

8th Grade
Newark Academy
Livingston, NJ

Ikshan Sairam

7th Grade
Heritage Middle School
Livingston, NJ

High School

Abby Kane

10th Grade
Summit High School
Summit, NJ

Angelica Agbayani

12th Grade
Livingston High School
Livingston, NJ

Shona Kumar

9th Grade
Livingston High School
Livingston, NJ

Eliana Park

10th Grade
Millburn High School
Millburn, NJ

Essay Guidelines

> Topic

Exploration of youth mental health and its impact.

> Format

Write an original essay. Your essay may include original research, poetry, and creative writing (personal/fictional).

  • word limit: 1000 words, no identifying info in the essay body (must be anonymous for judging)
  • media: no photos or graphics
  • references: must be appropriately cited
  • font: Times New Roman, 12pt, single-spaced
  • file: PDF

> Sample Prompt Ideas

Below are some examples to help spark ideas for your own essay topics: 

  • What affects your mental well‑being and how do you cope?
  • How does social media shape your mental health?
  • What would a culture of mental wellness look like in your school or town?

Competition Details

> Eligibility

Middle School (grades 6–8), High School (grades 9–12), public, private, charter, or homeschool students enrolled in the state of New Jersey

Evaluation Rubric

> Point Categories

Entries will be evaluated based on creativity, impact, relevance, and their potential to spark meaningful discussions.

Prizes

Gold

$500

Silver

$300

Bronze

$100

+ a letter of Recognition from United States Senator Andy Kim  for ALL winners

Frequently Asked Questions:

The essays will be evaluated by a Judges Panel consisting of a Middle School English Teacher, a High School English Teacher, a High School Psychologist and an adolescent Clinical Psychologist. Each judge will be from a different school district in NJ.

The Judges Panel will be given a rubric and each of them will assign the points to each entry based on the rubric. The score averages will decide the ranking.

The Judges will not see the participant names and it will be anonymized to enable a bias free evaluation.

No. If they do, only the first entry will be considered valid.

No. The essay entry is individualized.

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